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House of Pain

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Had a bicycle trip today and found this beauty.
HDR panorama [5][5] & slight post-processing for the sky.

Kemi, Finland.


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Nikon D300
Nikkor AF-S 12-24/4G @ 12mm

Copyright © Jari Mäntylä 2011. All rights deserved.
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

Easily, first thing you notice about this work it's the sun. It blasted me from my messages, and called for a click and a review <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" title=":) (Smile)"/>
After this, I start give a better look to all the work in it's whole. The house is really pittoresque, and the dead branches on the front, and the image itself, really suggest an "House of Pain" atmosphere.
And this is my suggestion: all the house itself seems too shiny for an "House of Pain". I think I preferred it if you made the house a bit more dark, keeping the sky as is it now.
A bit of light on the ground could keep the house stand, as a quasi negative space.

Composition, Sharpness and noise: all the rest is really OK!